Cardboard wrapped arrived this thing long smooth neck and six string locked in ruffed up shed frantically played till fingers bleed pays off with the coolest riff rockin' hard like a giant cliff friends with drum and base life went off to another phase greasy agent, giant record deal life on a roll, that was the feel playin' hard, no gentle song nothing, could really go wrong caricature like a bad cartoon acting out like loon sex and drugs and wrecking room heading fast to his doom tucked away in rehab made comeback like Ahab
Rock on, ha de Gött!
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UlleHaddock 
I love this, Ulle; love what you’ve done with the photo — you’ve gone off on a wild whirl of whimsy; clever and accomplished 🙂
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Thank you. It came to me like a guitar riff. Had to stop the car to write it down 😀
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that is brilliant, Ulle; and it rhymes and has rhythm; it must be hard to do that in a second language
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Great one, Ulle!! I especially like the first stanza but the whole thing has such great rhythm and rhyme and story.
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Thank you! Now I just have to learn to play the guitar so I can make a riff to it.
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forgot to mention, great ending !
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it really rocks 🙂
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just read this gain: one of my favourites; like a great rock ‘n’ roll song it gets better each time it’s played 🙂
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Thank you so much
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